Sunday, 24 March 2013

Camp Diamante






Success Criteria:
  • Re-tell a camp experience in a diamante form.
  • We used an online site to help follow the form of a diamante poem.
  • Use the senses. 
  • Improve words with a thesaurus so we have no repeated words.
  • Understand that every word you use is precious so cut small words that do not help the poem.

4 comments:

  1. That was a good story Lucca maybe you could make them bigger

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  2. We would both like to go on the balancing bike because you can go really fast as your poem tells us.
    Charlie and William MSJPS

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  3. Locca I like yours a lot . But can you make the letters a bit bigger because I cannot read them on my screen.

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  4. King Remy you spelt my name incorrectly, my name is Lucca not Locca.

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